Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A significant proportion of the society believe that it is more rewarding for researchers to publicise all their knowledge and research findings in areas of science, business and academics, while others argue that such knowledge are too important to be a common publication. However, though there are cogent reasons from both schools of thoughts, I believe it is more in the interest of the various disciplines if they restrict their findings in their profession to themselves.
Supporters of the trend in which scholars share their researches with the public base their stand on certain points. Educating the public about discoveries in the different sectors would generally improve the living condition of the populace. Medical scientific discoveries if made a common knowledge would tutor people on how to more adequately improve their health, innovations on ways of carrying out profitable business would encourage local business to thrive. Also educational publications in schools can tutor the general society on science and technology which is essential in today's manufacturing industries.
However, there are a diversity of reasons why experts should make their research finding a secret.
Firstly, certain discoveries can easily be misused by the public if they have an adequate grasp of it. Once information has been broadcast to the public, it spreads at an exponential rate and would be difficult controlling how the society utilizes such foreign news. As an example, doctors usually keep the principles behind the making of a pharmaceutical drug covert because of the propensity of the public producing an unhealthy version of the medication. Also academicians exert an amount of controll in extending ideas about technological breakthroughs to the public because such could be avenues for improving terrorism. An illustration of this is seen in the case of journals about radioactive materials. As such minerals are weapons of mass destruction, only a privileged few are at liberty of knowing the fundamentals of such scientific aspects.
In conclusion, though its a popular belief that scholars should openly share crucial data about their fields, I am of the opinion that such scientific, academic and business journals should be only restricted to competent members of such sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48179271709 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04566948271 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560224089636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.346821434 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.785714286 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136068749318 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04155429654 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452702757176 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723914691737 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455227151946 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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