Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential ineasing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re and upholding a nationalistic spirit in a harmless manner. However, I strongly believe that ther...
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...less manner. However, I strongly believe that there are convincing points why th...
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...elieve that there are convincing points why this fact is wrong and has been exte...
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...tunate in lossing might therefore become embittered and engrieved, become violen...
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...refore become embittered and engrieved, become violent and cause harm to the opp...
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...rom the conflict that arose when England beat Germany woefully in the Atlantic 1...
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...ct that arose when England beat Germany woefully in the Atlantic 1996 games. ...
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...woefully in the Atlantic 1996 games. Also international athletic competitions wor...
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...zens wallow in penury. During the period of such world sports events, the inciden...
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...incidence of crime abounds as there are influx of people from all continents of the wo...
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...limited resources like social amenities, food and shelter are also exhausted , s...
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...es, food and shelter are also exhausted , social insecurity is heightened as th...
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...s, food and shelter are also exhausted , social insecurity is heightened as the...
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... are also exhausted , social insecurity is heightened as the foreigners might h...
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...ecurity is heightened as the foreigners might have conflicting and ulterior moti...
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...untries economical and social conditions could make the citizens become less fait...
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...pirit of comradeship. In conclusion, though it is a popular belief that inter...
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...al relationship and creating a patriotic emotion, I believe that the evils that ...
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...nship and creating a patriotic emotion, I believe that the evils that emanate fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55483870968 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0068246041 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.474115831 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137600980333 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485838389963 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494294834635 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905264800534 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397155912505 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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