Instead of asking the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay their own tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people consider it necessary for the government to subsidise all universities to ensure that eligible students can attend college free of charge. I do not agree with this idea, although students of low socio-economic status can be exempted from tuition fees.
First, higher education is more of a lifetime investment that students make for their future than a compulsion. Some students choose to receive higher education because they can get self-improvement in college and find better work opportunities when they step into society. For example, students can learn various things at college and widen their horizons, they can also get specialized knowledge attainment. The staggering cost of tuition fees can also be a pressure making students take opportunities more seriously. Furthermore, students who have difficulties paying for their tuition can apply the education loans provided by the government which has low interests and can be easily repaid after college.
On the other hand, many of the high school graduates are pretty mediocre academically, making it free for them to spend several years in universities may be a waste of their time and the public educational resources, cause they may spend a lot of time on recreation and skipping classes rather than studying. Instead, they can choose to attend vocational training which is beneficial for their future jobs. By comparison, primary and secondary education deserve more of government expenditure as students are still deemed as minors, who are not legally permitted to work as paid employees. Postgraduate programs are also in need of financial support from the state, as without such support universities would lose the battle with the private sector for talented researchers.
To sum up, students from disadvantaged backgrounds can be made exempt from tuition fees, while it is not acceptable to abolish tuition fees for everybody.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, still, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41471571906 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96892026395 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578595317726 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6020960119 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.916666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216219493651 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894688031317 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479932571245 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13372002573 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040394385301 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.