International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
International Tourism has globally brought a lot of beneficial impacts to many places, and also its influences on indigenous people and the environment. I personally believe that international tourism would bring about more significant disadvantages that I will outline in the following essay.
Firstly, perhaps the main drawbacks for this issue is that international tourism tends to make the local region landscape more commercial. This is because many tourism facilities such as luxurious villas or five-star hotels are built in order to support tourism activities. By establishing these amenities, local inhabitants may feel disturbed and pressed by crowd situations continuously. Another adverse effect is that the younger generation pays more attention to foreign culture rather than local wisdom. In this case, they are generally attracted and try to imitate it obviously. As a result, when local wisdom is being forgotten slowly, it would definitely be the ground for the disappearance of precious aspects of native society.
Turning to essential impacts, it is irrefutable that one of the advantages for this issue is enlarging job opportunities. This means, local residents can become a tourist guide or open a traditional food restaurant and sell unique souvenirs, ranging from trinkets to traditional clothing. To add to this, they can directly promote local culture while earning income. Moreover, global tourism opens larger opportunities not only for the inhabitants but also the places to be well known around the world. For example, when the destination is properly managed, it would be attractive for both tourists and backpackers.
In summary, it seems to me that making the local landscape to become commercial and ignoring local wisdom are substantial drawbacks. Thus, this outweighs its potential benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59498207885 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0592652409 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8213066287 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207386031258 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657201379127 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532259784363 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134033569636 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063547014295 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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