Thanks to the development of transportation, people in modern society can travel to almost all countries in the world. Some of the popular tourist spots had been visited by more tourists than they did before. Although the tourism industry may become a majority source of income in some countries, negative impacts on daily lives cannot be ignored. From my perspective, boosting the tourism industry is a double-edged sword.
Boosting tourism industry leads to economic growth. People can earn more money and improve their living quality by engaging in the industry. Take Vietnam for example, tour guides can earn much more than the average salary of other kinds of jobs, and thus becoming a popular choice of job within students graduated from colleges. Aside from improving the economy, developing the tourism industry can also build a good reputation for the country. The international visibility may be raised by more and more visitors, and build up a virtuous cycle to attract much more tourist to visit the country. As a result, many countries put their eye on developing the tourism industry.
By contrast, there is some negative side effect caused by the trend. First of all, the scenery spot may become too crowded to live in. For instance, Venice has attracted millions of people to visit in the past few years, but the local people keep moving out of the city because of the increasing number of tourists. Besides, international tourists may offend the lifestyle of local people, such as Islamic culture or Buddhist belief in some countries. Last but not least, the overwhelmed visitors may lead to damage of resources: both cultural heritage and natural resources. Some governments, such as Austria, have started to concern the issue. Thus, they restricted the numbers of tourists in the resort.
In conclusion, the international tourism industry indeed plays a critical role of the economy in some countries, but the drawbacks still cannot be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...l to almost all countries in the world. Some of the popular tourist spots had been visited ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.165625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71324694497 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3218696767 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221146438271 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611316948707 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727868429049 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121070853632 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095506344082 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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