One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that tourism to another nations became cheaper and the countries also offer more tourists to visit there. As such there are both positive and negative impacts of the mentioned view.In my opinion this apprehension is unwarranted and should be rejected
To commence with,there are dulge of arguments in favour of my stance.The most prepondrent one is that the tourism promotes their country economic growth.To elaborate it the more tourists will visit there and the accomodation will be neccessary so they spend money on that.It cannot only contribute to increase social bonding, but leads to numerous other benefits in various fields.Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers,masses can enhance the quality and productivity with much ease,efficacy and convenience.Needless to say,all these merits stand good at one's stead as far as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore,another pivotal expect of this aforementioned prepositions is that it is likely to help one excel and thrive in varied areas.Besides, the travelling help to get knowledge about their cultural values which make the person easy to survive there.For instance,study results are published by the government of Australia in May 2012 and March 2014 clearly indicate that the movement towards another nations is cruical and critical for the development of nation.
On the other hand,the section of society contraducts the above- said view .They pondered that the foreign persons disturb their lifestyle and leak the information to another countries related to military and other things.Therefore, they are not in favour of my view point.
To conclude that, having pondered over it is crystal clear that the benefits of promoting tourism are indeed to great dire to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38720538721 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18902324979 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 252.801424047 49.4020404114 512% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 320.0 106.682146367 300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.4 20.7667163134 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6 7.06120827912 292% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161154686488 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792445497429 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443040118734 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735787374667 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330689203356 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.61 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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