One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that a year distance between school education and university for refreshment like for travelling is good.There is wide spread worry that it would lead myriad of concerns in one's life.In my opinion this apprehension is unwarranted and rejected.
To commence with,there are deluge of arguments in favour of year gap between university and school learning.The most preponderant one is that refreshment of mind.After school education childern get boar and for refreshing mind they went to new places as a tourists and collect new knowledge.It cannot only contribute to increase there focus towards study but leads to numerous other benefits in various fields.Thanks,to the wide range of advantages it offers,masses can enhance the quality and productivity with much ease,efficacy and convenience.Needless to say,all these merits stand good as far as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore,another pivotal aspect of this aforementioned prepositions is likely to help the excel and thrive in varied areas.Besides, the students get chance to think about their future streams and can easily learn things by visiting places.For instance, the study results are published by the government of Australia clearly indicates that the distance between higher education and senior secondary education is cruical and critical for the development of society.
On the other hand, a section of society contraducts the above-said view.They pondered that free mind will get lot of ideas and by travelling their mind get distracted from their goals.Therefore it is clear that why some are not in favour of my view point.
To conclude that,having pondered over it is crystal clear that the one year distance in both studies are indeed to great dire to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41355932203 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29018981787 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.993480546 49.4020404114 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 319.4 106.682146367 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.0 20.7667163134 284% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14750968196 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749601483283 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036129644113 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749601483283 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036129644113 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.54 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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