Internet has played vital role in shaping our lives. But due to this advancement, thinking and acting in same manner has arised. In this essay, I will argue how these modifications are making our lives as efficient as possible.
Firstly, the whole world has come together on tip of our thumb. Because of unlimited usages and uninterrupted connectivity, people have easy access of their family and friends who are living even in remote areas. Secondly, access to any information has become handy such as latest news updates, things happening around the world and much more. For instance, no one has to wait for newspaper for recent news. This is how internet has made our lives much more convenient and smoother.
Despite this, however, due to advent of social media and latest gadgets, the scenario may become painful. Under the influence of social media platforms such as YouTube, Instagram, Facebook, especially younger generation will try to imitate them. In a process of increasing their followers, many influencers will try to copy the content and thus originality and logical behaviour is sometimes lost.
To conclude, there is no denial in ample amount of perks that has been offered by internet. With the appropriate usages lives and economy becomes playful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13526570048 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66454792256 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671497584541 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0116582867 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7692307692 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153242747469 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054176828994 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422613465114 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936285762129 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039330148906 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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