The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and what solutions can you suggest?
The introduction of the Internet has indeed affected how information is communicated and led to many unprecedented issues. While the Internet has had many negative impacts on human beings, there are viable solutions that can be taken to address the problems.
To commence with, the development of the Internet largely contributed to the spreading of fake news. Due to the ample and abundant data people can access, it is difficult to distinguish authentic information from misleading one. Many people would argue that before the Internet era, fake news can spread through word of mouth. However, I believe that the Internet worsens the situation as the spread of many edited proofs interferes with people’s ability to determine the truth. Another problem associated with the Internet would probably be the degradation of cognitive function. It is undeniable that plagiarism can be conducted more easily nowadays. The main reason is that the existence of E-books and social media makes referencing much more labor-saving. Consequently, the cognitive development of Internet users, especially the young, can be adversely influenced due to their overreliance on online websites.
However, preventive measures could be promptly taken to tackle the problems. First and foremost, people should carefully evaluate every single piece of information they collect online. To be more specific, the authority, sources, and purposes of the information should be clarified. It is also advisable that people familiarize themselves with the general characteristics of fake news to identify them at a glance. Furthermore, solutions to mentioned problems would probably involve the school effort to facilitate students with the necessary skills when using the Internet. Students should always be aware of the possible downsides and how to utilize the Internet wisely.
In conclusion, while the improvement in spreading and gathering information that the Internet brings has certain drawbacks on users, feasible solutions involving people awareness and education would mitigate the problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68167202572 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00457841377 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4598071607 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.941176471 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231417134875 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758397151034 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495227813263 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138337251792 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402896284471 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.