The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
It is true that the internet nowsaday has completely changed how information were shared and consumed. But there will indoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend that lead to various serious problem. This essay will discuss these issues and I believe that societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
As the development of the internet and the more people use it today, several related problems may cause. Firstly, children can potentially access to dangerous site. Due to curiosity, they give their parents bank account for the website or believe in silly advices on social media. Secondly, online fraud and hacking will increase quickly. Your information like email address, password if you did not pay attention carefully, would be stolen by hackers.
In my view, goverments should enforce more stringent penalties for those who trying to collect other information for bad purpose. School and parents should take more care of their child, make them send less time on their phone by several out door activities.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle these problems that are certain a rise as the growth of the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...otential problems. As the development of the internet and the more people use ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24338624339 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6022818618 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724867724868 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8101999117 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164622256417 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592264894635 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544400367501 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101592123112 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051925732104 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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