The internet has vastly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many believe that the internet has encouraged human's access to data. I strongly believe that the internet has benefited people in many ways. Its positive impacts on work and private life will be elaborated below.
Advent of internet could be attributed to development of the world in recent decades. This is because the invention has fundamentally changed the working methods of people in terms of amount of paperwork and communication. The internet has enabled data of companies to be uploaded to center of servers, which relieves their employees of manually categorizing and managing materials. An additional point is that firms' resources might be saved from meeting and conferences which could be held online. This is particularly the case for international businesses which often pay a large part of their fund for cross-national flights and hospitality. Furthermore, colleagues are able to reach their counterparts for working purposes within seconds thanks to support of smart devices with internet. To illustate, technicians could contact their senior coworker to ask for urgent issue when the person is on holiday. Thus, use of internet has impact economicaly to individuals workers and their workplaces as a whole.
The internet also have many merits on individuals' private life namely education and daily convenience. Harnessing internet entry, people could take advantage of e-learning to enrich their base of knowledge for the time being. Given great amount of valuable information realeased everyday, ones can search and study for either matters or hot topics that interest them, at any where they have internet access. In daily life, people are now familiar with online purchases or banking which have made their life easier than ever. Finally, people can establish new relationships without traditional face-to-face meeting, this would save the time and energy for them if the relationships do not work out.
In sum, internet connection has many advantages upon our businesses and individuals' lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...mount of valuable information realeased everyday, ones can search and study for either m...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...rs or hot topics that interest them, at any where they have internet access. In daily lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, second, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46006389776 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93222513591 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623003194888 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9516244496 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.529411765 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129500075322 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420572723762 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271792168779 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076329532005 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205176633543 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.