In the modern time, it is generally argued that beside the benefits as a tool of communication, the internet is also play a key role in people'seclusion from their society. In this essay i will analyze both sides and state my viewpoint.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why protesters claim that it is a detrimental tool in the way people connect to others theseday. To be more precise, they considered this technology as a waste of time, and by using it, members are not so interactive as they were. This idea is partly undeniable because there are a variety of means of interacting that this technology offers. For instance, user can use message or upload photos or thoughts without face to face to others. Hence, this lower the chance for people to practice their communication skills such as body languages or gestures.
On the other hand, it can also be said that internet has brought significant impacts, and it is vital to our community in the way it helps us to keep in touch with others. In fact, The internet offers us a huge resoures to communicate to others Nowsaday, People can easilly connect with their relatives or friends despite the geographic distances as it were in the past. Furthermore, we can also enhance our skills by making new friends and practice it daily.
Putting everything into consideration, eventhough the new technology may have some drawbacks. I still believe that it will continue to bring ease of use and beneficial aspects in people'interaction skills.
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Now-a-days,most of the people
Now-a-days,most of the people using internet with different purpoes like learning new things ,communicate with each pother and sharing their ideas and internet help us to improve our skills.But,however some people were arguing internet is actually destroying our communicaation skills,people were spending most of the time in front of computer with the help of internet.
To beign with,the world has latest technology with the help of internet were we can communicate with others with the help of social media like face book,twitter,etc.And we can learn new technology in the home for exampe,we can take google ,google is one of the advanced technology in the world,where we can learn online courses in the youtube.mainly,while using internet it save times and we can travel new places with the help of google maps and it tells new things what happen over all the world.
However,with the help of internet most of the people were sitting infornt of computer and there is no interaction with each other. with the help of latest technology it destroying our cultures.in olden days ,at fesstival time or marriage intivation people were used to go home and invite ,But now-a -days most of the people was using internet and sharing messages through face book ,twitter,etc.there is no communication between each other directly.coming to eductional purposes,people used to learn onlines coursesrather to atttend classes with the help of internet.people who learn from internet who doesn't have partical knowledge on particular subject.
In conclusion,in many ways internet has various advantages and disadvantages.internet is good way to learn new skills and save times,but it destroying our communication skills.In my opinion,internet is one of the best way to learn new skills or technology and to communicate each other over all the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, for instance, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87548638132 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92478136206 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3328804321 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.416666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092002851893 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306903424798 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210744235819 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525255404901 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162426649593 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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