It is believed that a heavier sentence on citizens who embroil road traffic offences can vividly optimise the safety of road users. Partially, I consent to the same perspective for reasonable points, which I will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraph.
It is believed that a heavier sentence on citizens who embroil road traffic offences can vividly optimise the safety of road users. Partially, I consent to the same perspective for reasonable points, which I will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, it is contended that imposing stricter traffic regulations encumbers drivers who must pay the fine. Since offenders living in low socioeconomic status struggle for their daily expenses, they earn 20$ per month for their job, even less. If they receive driver license suspensions or criminal record, there will be the increasing rate of unemployment. In addition, the police will work double supervision and need more personnels. This would adversely affect in other cases to be resolved. Published by U.S Department of Justice, if the police maintains public trust through effective policing, community will value more to the principles of procedural justice and legitimacy.
On the other hand, though, we should value more the benefits that this programs may cultivate public awareness of using road. Although caring for car safety is simply to be law-abiding citizen, it will hinder them from serious fatalities of traffic accident. For instance, they must protect themselves with using seatbelt and helmet to ameliorate its after effects - internal and spinal cord injuries, cited by Australia Better Health Channel. Furthermore, the final result is expected to reduce the total number of road collisions on highways. The projections of National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA) has estimated that, in 2023, 10.000 Americans died in the first three months of the year.
Overall, it seems to me that awarding executing penalty to driving offenders/traffic violators acquires the immense influences, including to enhance public awareness of traffic policies and to lessen the number of road fatalities. This is as long as the authority has been ready for the rules commenced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$20'.
Suggestion: $20
...gle for their daily expenses, they earn 20$ per month for their job, even less. If ...
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Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...d more personnels. This would adversely affect in other cases to be resolved. Published b...
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Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...er cases to be resolved. Published by U.S Department of Justice, if the police ma...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...using seatbelt and helmet to ameliorate its after effects - internal and spinal cor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47039473684 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89937672272 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664473684211 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5717399257 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.866666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355615945803 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104790033075 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156491843234 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276865735383 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.311131438062 0.056905535591 547% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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