It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
There are some controversial ideas heating a debate over the fact that many people think university students can gain more tremendous benefits from settling far from home rather than staying with their parents. While this thinking is valid to some extents, I would contend that the merits of living far from parents still outweight its counterparts.
Evidently, settling in different areas can positively impacts on the life of scholars. First and for most, college students no longer have to endure the pressure or complaining from their guardians. In fact, most Asian parents are very considerate to their children, and often treat them like a toddlers when they grow up, which actually annoy older children who want to be freedom. Hence, by living for from their parents, seniors can feel more comfortable to absorb massive insights in university. Moreover, this can also enhance children’s independence ability. Since living far from parents means they often don’t have support from their parents, they will learn how to manage home, set up time schedule, cook a meal, which they haven’t encounter before, by themselves. Thus, these student can hone a set of skills to survive independently in this harsh world.
While the redeeming features of living far away are widely acknowledged, it is unfair if those of staying close to parents are ignored. Without the shadow of doubt, this acts as precusor for the students to accomplish their academic journey straightforwardly. Since they don’t have to pay attention to their financial state. There are a wealth of students who mitigate from rural areas to megacities to study. They themselves work in partime job in order to find their own incomes to pay the rent and prohibitively cost of living, which may distract them from learning. However, with the financial support form their own parents, they will more concentrate on the studying.
In conclusion, it is indisputable that parents are a stable source of money for studying. Nevertheless, living independently can stand students a good stead compared to others who stay with their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a toddler' or simply 'toddlers'?
Suggestion: a toddler; toddlers
...eir children, and often treat them like a toddlers when they grow up, which actually annoy...
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Line 2, column 780, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'these students'?
Suggestion: this student; these students
... encounter before, by themselves. Thus, these student can hone a set of skills to survive ind...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eir academic journey straightforwardly. Since they don’t have to pay attention to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22418879056 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79398842756 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0987410471 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.176470588 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320473546524 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957204574577 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646236228417 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206921433246 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290914003657 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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