It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, someone is thought that students should live on the campus of college instead of living in their homes with their parents. Personally, I agree with this view because the younger students can develop themselves.
To begin with, the college students are young and much strong, they should have many opportunities to receive challenges outside home. When they live in school, they must prepare anything for themselves. For instance, they go to work for money, take care of themselves, do laundry clothes, cook meals,... Students certainly have difficulties when they live without their parents. At the same time, they could learn much knowledge from friends or anyone whom they meet in communication. The students will have part-time work, and have experiences when they dare to go out into society, they will have themselves more the valuable lessons and have many good friends.
Conversely, when students live with their parents, they seem could passive because they are coshered, parents could make for them anything. For example, they mustn't cook meals, do laundry their clothes,... As a result, they will still be a child. They don't take care of themselves. The students could lose experiences in society and lose independence. They learn to live alone through their effort without the help of other people even their parents.
In conclusion, college students should live on campus to experience and work to make money and take care of themselves. For the reasons mentioned above, each student should choose the lifestyle suitably and develop themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.304 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6089200831 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1419889579 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293254844232 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11308239313 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898459657341 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216098507249 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815174249015 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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