It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents Do you agree or disagree

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It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents.
Do you agree or disagree?

School-aged children have divergent views as to whether they should live in a dormitory or at their private homes with their relatives. As far as I am concerned, I partly concur to this statement.

On the one hand, it is indisputable that there is a limited benefit of living together with their parents. Firstly, they would prefer experience more concentration on their learning rather than be required to accommodate their parents with the domestic households. All matters associated with finance, physical amenities, . . . could be tackled more effortlessly without any hesitate or worriment.

On the other hand, it witnesses a smorgasbord of distinct advantages accruing from living in an on-campus place. Firstly, those who graduate from tertiary education have faculty to living in the hall of residence which is equivalent to their home with the adequate provision of the aspect of school-house such as libraries, boarding room, canteen, . . . The most principle example of this matter may be that students are capable of enhancing their academic achievements with the aid of teachers' consultancy which is a solid bedrock establishing the solid rapports with their lecturers. Secondly, staying at schools foster the all-round personal development. They are coerced to confront not only the ongoing pressures of day-to-day lives but also the finance management, cooking which hone their social skills taken into account as a worthwhile backbone in the fast-paced world. As a consequence they could run a higher risk of being self-reliant in the developed society.

Thirdly, individuals may be exposed to numerous personal perspectives and visions, ranging from peers to supervisors, which may be the impetus of critical thinking and extend a sheer volume of knowledge.

Bringing up a rear, it is advisable for pupils to have a well-thought-out decision to board at the campus.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...hool-aged children have divergent views as to whether they should live in a dormitory or at t...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ciated with finance, physical amenities, . . . could be tackled more effortlessly ...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Could
...with finance, physical amenities, . . . could be tackled more effortlessly without an...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...as libraries, boarding room, canteen, . . . The most principle example of this ma...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... libraries, boarding room, canteen, . . . The most principle example of this matt...
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Line 5, column 880, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...while backbone in the fast-paced world. As a consequence they could run a higher r...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44709897611 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09970120493 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638225255973 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.04942182 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280959626007 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859208218534 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769103164007 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136786837754 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881905486506 0.056905535591 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...hool-aged children have divergent views as to whether they should live in a dormitory or at t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ciated with finance, physical amenities, . . . could be tackled more effortlessly ...
^^
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ted with finance, physical amenities, . . . could be tackled more effortlessly wi...
^
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d with finance, physical amenities, . . . could be tackled more effortlessly with...
^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Could
...with finance, physical amenities, . . . could be tackled more effortlessly without an...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ch as libraries, boarding room, canteen, . . . The most principle example of this ...
^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...as libraries, boarding room, canteen, . . . The most principle example of this ma...
^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... libraries, boarding room, canteen, . . . The most principle example of this matt...
^
Line 5, column 880, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...while backbone in the fast-paced world. As a consequence they could run a higher r...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44709897611 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09970120493 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638225255973 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.04942182 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280959626007 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859208218534 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769103164007 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136786837754 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881905486506 0.056905535591 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.