In many parts of the world living far away from home than living at home with parents. In my opinion, Students have both positive and negative effects which will be discussed in this essay, on the one hand, this tendency Comes with 2 advantages
from live far away home, firstly we live from independently because we earn money and food cook, Moreover, the parent needn't care such as the childhood and everyone has an awareness self-reliant. Secondly, we have the free who live yourself, This is mainly because You can make everything If you enjoy it. For example, you can self-determined school and the subject of you and you needn't ask your parent's advice, and therefore you can self-can not in your life and broaden your horizons.
on the one hand, this phenomenon two Creates Some disadvantages. To begin with, we do everything to earn money, because of see Payment to learn and rent the house, however, you don't have help from your family, and for this reason, haven't time to learn and care' for yourself. Secondly, sometimes you would feel only So when you have Sicked and Someone does not protect and care about you, and you would be lost in life, as a result, you have no direction for the future, and in conclusion, you feel bored and give up.
A thought Students has many disadvantages there are number of positive effects that Should be taken into account.
- In many counties people are now living longer than even before Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments Other people think there are Benefits if society has more elderly people To what extent do the advantages of having an age 78
- Some people believe that shops should not be allowed to sell fast food that has been scientifically proven to be bad for people s health 61
- Task 1 the table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004 2000 2001 2002 2003 2004 Nigeria 205 000 210 000 190 000 210 000 213 000 Chad 0 0 0 8 000 50 000 Congo 275 000 234 000 222 000 215 000 203 000 Somalia 5 000 8 000 17 000 21 85
- It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents 56
- In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71666666667 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51490004219 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595833333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6916995926 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.75 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247604508105 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133524022951 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1882734182 0.0667982634062 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163696419595 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14258138406 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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