In many counties, people are now living longer than even before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are Benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people agrue that olding population go up issuse for governments, while there are benefits of societies have elder. In my opinion, olders have both positive and negative effects which will be discussed in the essay.
on the one hand, this tendency comes with two advantages for elder. Firstly, A few older have a lot of expensive because they live longer than younger, who have high vision and munch knowledge. As a result, they will possibly teach for children much valueable. Secondly, saving time and money for take care of Kids. This is mainly because, the elder protects children, when the perent will posibly leave their houses to work. For example, now, the parents are very busy and don't have time look after their kids, while the grandparents help they keep children, who can do their good job and boost income to cover the ruining costs for their family. Thus, the elder have maked friend with kids and save activites fee for family.
On the other hand, this phenomenon creates two disadvantages. In my think, the old people has negative effects which will be discussed in the essay. To begin with, the countries drop economy because the old people would possive be retirement and a few the person do Job, while the nation pay a lot of subsidy money for old resident. As a result, the government meet hard at finance, and remain low country develop. In addition, the government meet overpopulation. This mainty because, having many individual elder than everybody, who can't do work and don't die, but many kids be born, and everybody needs a home to live in, after the government cut dow trees to take timber, while the environment will possibly be polution, spescially the nation is likely to fall into debt and lose. social balance. There fore, the country have war, a lot of people be homeless, and air folution…
In conclusion, althought old person has many disadvantages, there are number of positive effects that should be take into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87164179104 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51433670421 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5708609009 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226113944425 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691969420466 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604130451095 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129189725137 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071124095291 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.