In this modern era, everyone prefers to use electronic media rather than printed media to know about the history. Gone are the days when people used to read books related to the past. In these days, masses use electronic gadgets for getting knowledge about earlier period. I agree some extent, that visuals are best way for historical information.
To commence with, there are plethora of reasons which make visualization acceptable in today's generation. First of all, movies have long lasting impact on human beings. For instance, if individuals watch a movie of older time, then it would be more appropriated medium as compare to read a book because visuals are more attractive and memorizable for humans. At this time, folks use various ways for getting knowledge of prior generations which are acceptable by them. Secondly, people of modern society, are not interested in reading books because while reading they feel bore. Technology has give an option to them to learn about history in an interesting way which is through visualization. So, it is convenient method for getting knowledge of by gone days.
In contrary, written documents are also acceptable source for knowledge about prior generations because films can not cover every incident in a proper way. Sometimes, movies do not give accurate information in the sake of making film more attractive.
In addition, only visualization and printed media are not source for information of past. There are so many monuments and historical places are available. By visiting those places folks can imagine events which were happened in earlier time.
To conclude, documentaries and books are not only medium for getting knowledge of older generations. There are different sources are available which can provide accurate information to people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...d media to know about the history. Gone are the days when people used to read books...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...riod. I agree some extent, that visuals are best way for historical information. To c...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an interesting way" with adverb for "interesting"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...n option to them to learn about history in an interesting way which is through visualization. So, it ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ause films can not cover every incident in a proper way. Sometimes, movies do not give accurate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31010452962 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7939905994 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2513209597 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113243044378 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354044810119 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044301653871 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633076060435 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051625468721 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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