It is a common aspiration among people to run their own business, rather that work for an employer. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, many people prioritize having their private business over being an employee and working under someone else’s supervision. In what follows it will be shown that the benefits of running entrepreneurship greatly outweigh any drawbacks.
Admittedly, people might face numerous obstacles while owning a business. Firstly, starting a business requires a high-risk investment. it is obvious that a few people can afford such amount of money. Moreover, the banks have certain limits when it comes to lending money for starting a business due to the risks of not paying back. Secondly, the majority of startup business companies find it challenging to get into the market. For instance, in our country, the market for the chocolate sector is governed by a huge company leaving almost no chances for the beginners who want to perform in this field.
Nevertheless, despite the disadvantages above, I believe that having a private business can be significantly beneficial. One of the main positive aspects of this is gaining the ability to make independent decisions. By being self-employed, people are forced to make various decisions regarding budget management, product quality, and even design. In the long run, this skill certainly can have a significant impact on their future career path. Another advantage of owning a business is earning more money. With the help of right strategies and successful business, people might be able to increase their profits in a short period.
In conclusion, owning a business brings more advantages such as the opportunity of being autonomous and is financially more profitable compared to any problems it causes. <span id="docs-internal-guid-c5fad489-7fff-5caf-1ac1-e3e1204ca4e3"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">Hence, people should be encouraged to start their own business in spite of the risks that they are likely to deal with. </span></p><div><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"><br></span></div></span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...siness requires a high-risk investment. it is obvious that a few people can afford...
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Line 6, column 407, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
... business companies find it challenging to get into the market. For instance, in our c...
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Line 6, column 606, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ners who want to perform in this field. Nevertheless, despite the disadvantages ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.60191082803 5.12529762239 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.09410113 2.80592935109 253% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62101910828 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.6617915457 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.941176471 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139712618764 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522692807759 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416059379733 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996468425467 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415575315935 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.0 12.4159519038 169% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.