Education has become the prime necessity after food, clothing and shelter. It is mandatory for young ones to attend school between ages of 5 and 16. A lot of individuals are in a notion of raising the age bar to 6 or 7 and 17 or 18. However, I would disagree to this notion of raising the age limit.
There are plethora of reasons behind my outlook. The most prominent is several studies have mentioned about the early development of brain and if early schooling will be promoted then it will enhance their learning abilities. Children possess a curious mind thus early schooling will aid in moulding their curiosity. Secondly, in order to compete with the fierce competition of the world, it is essential to start receiving education from an early age. These days, parents seldomly have spare time to spend with their offspring, thus making their child feel lonely. For an instance, parents of my niece are working day in and day out as a result they rarely get some time for my niece. Thus they got her admitted into a play school where she interacts with her friends and learns with a playful environment helping her to cope up with her lonely feelings.
People favouring a thought to ponder over the side of late schooling, might think that it will assist the child develop at his pace, Early childhood is priceless period of life which needs to be enjoyed rather than dooming it over the piles of books. However, sending a child early to school will help to point out the abilities that can be nurtured to make it outstanding or extraordinary in the later part of life.
To conclude, as early bird gets the worm so as early schooling has ample of advantages over late schooling and as the plant can be supported only till it is a tiny object. Thereby sharping young minds from an early age is utmost important to make them mould and to be better citizens of the world.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a of reasons behind my outlook. The most prominent is several studies have mentio...
^^
Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...they rarely get some time for my niece. Thus they got her admitted into a play schoo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60416666667 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46669819512 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8951163467 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.133333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237937114291 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823638866263 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761687657514 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142593774839 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857921610602 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a of reasons behind my outlook. The most prominent is several studies have mentio...
^^
Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...they rarely get some time for my niece. Thus they got her admitted into a play schoo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60416666667 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46669819512 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8951163467 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.133333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237937114291 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823638866263 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761687657514 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142593774839 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857921610602 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.