Most people believe that money is a very important consideration when choosing a job as it can help you get better lifestyle; however, there are some who believe it is more important to have a job you enjoy and that this and not money will lead to greater happiness and more balanced personal life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A section of society emphasizes on funds as only factor while selecting a job because it provides a quality of living. On the contrary, few believe to have a job which you love to do as it will cause more satisfaction in life. I will explain both the views and state my standpoint towards the end.
To embark with, wealth makes one capable of buying lavish objects to bring life at ease. But there is no point if your job makes you feel tiresome at the end of the day causing delirious effects on health, as the saying goes health is wealth. For example, my uncle runs day in and out to generate lump sum of profits neglecting food and importance of break making him fall ill every next week. However, with enormous wealth one can spend on luxurious living thereby rejuvenating their soul. An individual if earns huge bucks can provide better facilities to his/her off springs.
To begin with, following one's passion and focussing only on monetary pleasures provides a jest, proliferating mind without altering mental health. For an instance, the founder of Unacademy was earlier an IAS officer, the post which offers the highest job security and perks in India. He resigned from it and established an online educational portal, and expanded it aiming to follow that he enjoys. He burned midnight oil and now is the unicorn start-up of India. Monetary leisure are temporary and can vanish within fraction of seconds, but one should create memories that can be cherished for the life.
To conclude, while money cannot buy happiness I would recommend following that our conscience speaks aloud.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, while, for example, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86813186813 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55457675868 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681318681319 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3491352494 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145424416038 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434849781664 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577438877111 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841948460457 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574147890049 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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