In the contemporary epoch,it is challenging for city dwellers to do physical practice sufficiently.This essay will present the possible causes of this issue as well as the appropriate remedies to deal with it.
The problem is attributable to two main reasons.Firstly,many big cities are likely to become more and more densely overpopulated.To be more specific,there are fewer fitness spaces for the public such as parks and gyms.As a result, citizens could find it hard to do exercises on a regular basis.In addition, the hectic pace of life in urban areas is one of the main causes of this phenomenon.With the significantly increasing development of modern society,many individuals tend to be much more occupied with work compared to the past.Consequently, a large number of people have a tendency to have no time left for themselves,which leads to the impossibility of regularly working out.
Various measures can be taken in order to address the problem.First of all,the government could provide funding and allocate part of their budget to erect gym places that are adjacent to inhabited areas.Apparently,residents can have access to health zone,which helps them improve strength habitually.Furthermore,individuals should spend their leisure time doing physical activity such as walking downstairs and upstairs at the office or brisk walk after lunch.
In conclusion, there are two main contributors to the urban people's insufficiency of keeping fit and several solutions are suggested to put an end to the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51489361702 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.11765402802 2.80592935109 147% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663829787234 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 208.060087475 49.4020404114 421% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 324.0 106.682146367 304% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.75 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.0 7.06120827912 524% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148696614057 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084242691672 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417782612174 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084242691672 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417782612174 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 13.0946893788 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 50.2224549098 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.57 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.35 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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