It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?
Nowadays, people in the urban areas have difficulties in getting enough physical exercise. There are several reasons for this trend, and some actions could be taken to solve this problem,
To begin with, people in the cities lack physical exercise due to multiple reasons. Firstly, since modern life is too hustle, individuals rarely have time to go to the gym or play sports. For example, my best friend is a businessman and he has to work from Monday to Sunday without much free time. As a result, they tend to use free time to sleep or go to the cinema instead of workout since they are already too tired. Secondly, as many sports centers replace free playground, the cost of exercising increase. For instance, to join a gym, you must spend about 10$ per month as entry fee, which is too costly for some people. Therefore, poor people have fewer opportunity to work out.
Several solutions could be taken to promote community exercising. The first suggestion is that the governments should construct parks which are in the center of the residential areas. This will help the citizens to approach these sites easier and therefore are more willing to train physically regularly. At the same time, each enterprise could build some training facilities in their building to create spaces for employees to train. For example, Vinamilk builds a sports center inside their area to promote their workers' health. As a result, since these workers train regularly, they will have the health to work more efficiently.
In conclusion, the lack of physical training in the cities happens for some reasons, and some measures could be taken to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to hustle'?
Suggestion: to hustle
... reasons. Firstly, since modern life is too hustle, individuals rarely have time to go to ...
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Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'hustled'.
Suggestion: hustled
...sons. Firstly, since modern life is too hustle, individuals rarely have time to go to ...
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Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$10'.
Suggestion: $10
...ce, to join a gym, you must spend about 10$ per month as entry fee, which is too co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94604316547 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5171452863 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8140397877 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18551424338 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610442272717 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796422161966 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127646142132 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619000205725 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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