It is difficult for people in the cities getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?
It is argued that getting enough physical exercise is starting to be difficult for those who live in the cities. this essay will discuss the possible causes of this phenomenon and propose plausible solutions.
Nowadays, cities are experiencing more traffic jams than ever, with the rise in the use of personal vehicles. But what does this have to do with people not getting enough exercise in? Living in big cities leads people to live frenetic lives, leaving them with a number of things to do such as working, picking kids up from school, taking care of the house, etc., and all the free time vanishes while they wait in traffic. For example, in a big city like Rome, it is proven that during rush hours, it will take up to one hour for somebody to get across town. And almost nobody chooses to cycle to work because there are no cycle tracks and the roads are too dangerous.
A possible solution to this state of affairs could be an investment from the Government in making possible for people to get more exercise in. How? For example, by implementing the number of cycle tracks, or by giving incentives to those who walk or cycle to their working places. Public transports should be implemented, to relieve cities from the intense traffic situations, maybe even offering free subway tickets to those who perform at least 20 squats, just it is done in Russia since 4 years. Similarly, since being physically active is so important in order to be healthy, a program of free gym memberships or collective gym classes should be organized by employers.
To conclude, our hectic lives can make being active and fit a real struggle, but with small improvements, big changes could be easily made.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, similarly, so, while, at least, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7593220339 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50412816304 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616949152542 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.372585292 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24296417433 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875080495453 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878679896447 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131377656856 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855273319028 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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