It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of the older people than young People in many countries in the future.do you think it is positive or negative development
According to some researches the population of the gray masses Will be higher than youngsters in multifarious nations. IT is definitely a negative phenomenon before sharing my personal perception I will discribe both views in forthcoming paragraphs.
Advantageous side of growing the proportion of old ones is that, the advancement in medical sciences which increases the life span of old peeps which may rise the difference between in the amount of old and young generation. Firstly, people of the modern epoch having small families that is due to the social awarenesses of having small family will be happy family. Secondly, the hetric and stressful life deprived the masses for having children owing to these causes the ratio of young ones reduces.
However, The myriad of downsides are derived from the acceleration of old generation. First and foremost, the development of a region directly relay on the youngsters because they are totally familiar with the latest technology so declined rate of young People interrupt the progress of a national well as, it may also lead the economial crisis in a dwelling country therefore, old peeps are less productive. For instance, in the technosavy era the industrialisation totally depends upon technology and the most of the gray masses are technophobic where as the high rate of old people than youngsters may disturb the development of industry.
In my opinion, the presence of old masses Will motivate the new generation with their wealth of experience and advice despite this their downsides are more significant because it may have more negative impact than its possible ones.
In conclusion, although the inclined proportion gray peeps will decrease the unemployability, it will be detrimental for modern digital world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ost of the gray masses are technophobic where as the high rate of old people than youngs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32978723404 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99643711439 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1873543359 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.3 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205350010449 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756294485242 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420617709585 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107606651681 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274450141285 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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