Many people believe that living a city life offers greater benefits as compared to country side . To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Owing to this ultra modern epoch, the urban area considered more advantageous rather than village due to the range of amenities that are offered by the urbanization. I partially agree with this statement in light of the fact that both provide the reside with multifarious opportunities.
To commerce with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in the favor of residence in cities. First and foremost, the standard of education and academics is top notch in urban field. To justify this state of mind there is an epitome, the latest survey shows the mental ability of the students who gets their education from high tech schools is advance than other learner who belongs to country side in fact they perform better in national exams as compared to educatees those from rural area due to the facilities which they get from the up-to-date place.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, lifestyle of the village land have greater benefits in the term of health. Firstly, one who belongs to rural area is proven more healthy however, others are not that much fit owing to their urban lifestyle in simple words, research reveals that peeps reside in country side have a healthy lifestyle since they consume only fresh and organic food. Moreover, due to the Lack of transportation and industries these places are less contemplated that increase the quality of life in these places.
To conclude, Even though the country side have their own merits and diverse opportunities, the urbanization is still the first preference of the individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... in light of the fact that both provide the reside with multifarious opportunities. To ...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
... standard of education and academics is top notch in urban field. To justify this state o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, still, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05019305019 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6281782664 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4841382731 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948201973856 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348713960272 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231101584186 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555688882733 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147719278526 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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