It is generally accepted that families are not as closed as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.
In the past, every person of a family was lived together whereas now, sometimes children, father, and mother are stayed different places in order to study, or earn money. Although there are some reasons that act as a catalyst to separate the people from a family, I believe this tendency can be changed through taking proper actions.
Certainly, there are some causes that influence the people to detach from their household nowadays. Firstly, as earning money is one of the important for livelihood that increases from last few years, men member of a house usually go to the outside of his own are...
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In recent days, we can see
In recent days, we can see that families are choosing to have an individual life instead of staying close together. Most of them are leaving their families because of jobs in cities. We will discuss the reasons and possible suggestions to bring them together.
Firstly, in the old days, each family has around 20 to 30 people staying together. This is primarily due to the occupations which were localized in the village and because of the bonding between each family member. But as the country started developing and cities emerged, each person in the family tend to choose their occupation in one or other cities. This made them leave their village, family and started settling in the cities. As the people got separated, the emotional attachment and bonding between the family members decreased. For example, we can see now people in cities hardly meet their relatives even though they are staying nearer.
But relationships and interacting with people in the family are very important than your professional life. This can be possible with the family reunions frequently. Family reunions will help people to interact with their near relatives, helps them to share their experiences. Through this, we can teach the next generation about family values, the advantages of staying together in a closed environment. We can also make use of technology to be in constant touch with our family members, for example calling and wishing our relatives on their special occasions.
On a closure note, the majority of the people migrating to cities on job purposes and hence they are losing their families. Family reunions and frequently interacting with our relatives over a call will make them fell stay closer, even though they are not together.
are stayed different places
are stayed at different places
earning money is one of the important for livelihood
earning money is one of the important things for livelihood
some preventive measures we should take to eliminate this problem.
we should take some preventive measures to eliminate this problem.
some preventive measures should be taken to eliminate this problem.
Sentence: Firstly, as earning money is one of the important for livelihood that increases from last few years, men member of a house usually go to the outside of his own area for a job to maintain a happy lifestyle.
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