These days, there emerges a controversion concerning the most essential factor for a person to be successful in fields such as sports or music. While it is often believed that people have to be born talented in order to claim success in those domains, some people think that with proper training, the majority of children could become experts in any professions that they want. In my opinion, although education plays a crucial role in people’s achievements, natural talents are the most essential factor that makes the top professionals.
On the one hand, people could argue that owing to the development of education schemes, every people is given an equal chance to success. Take Cristiano Ronaldo, a renowed football player, for instance. Even though he was not considered a gifted child when he started playing football, he still becomes one of the greatest player with an astounding number of prizes, thanks to his hard work and his brilliant coaches. Eventually, he has become an influential figure that encourages people to follow their targets.
On the other hand, most of other sports are still dominated by people who are born with talents. For example, in chess, the top 100 grandmasters tended to claim the title before reaching their age of 18, which implies that they have been excellent at the game since they were children. An explanation for this could be that with the same training conditions, the prodigies are likely to outperform the average children in most cases.
All in all, it is true that appropriate education could help people to achieve success at some levels in various fields, including sports and music. Nonetheless, when it comes to the highest level, giftedness tends to be the determinant factor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess tends to be the determinant factor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nonetheless, so, still, while, for example, for instance, such as, in most cases, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06968641115 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69952780607 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8697247793 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274172990951 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952457648001 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671343206806 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156991585764 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714780833844 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.