It is harder for children living in the 21st century than that in the past. How far do you agree with this statement? Give your opinions.
impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of increaseing crime rates is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to beleive that childrens' behavior can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, modern lifestyle of children can provide the society with some noticable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of using computers and schools' educational strategies are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience when I was a university student I performed an academic experiment which discovered children issues in 21 st century . Therefore beneficial ramification of boys mental well being apparently can bee seen.
Within the realm of science, living in the last century might increase the consequences of school atendants problems. Moreover, fundamental aspects of children management could not relate to this reality that the girls' obesity pertain to their physical activities. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a presitigious university has asserted that the downsides of convenient transportation is correlated negatively with computerized education. Hence, it is correct to presume preconceived notions of increased indoor activities.
In conclusion, Although there are several compelling arguments on both sides I profoundly believe that the benefits of living in the 21st century far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of the internet sciences prove the significance of virtual learning, but also pinpoint education studies implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63492063492 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15793241901 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694444444444 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 252.0 20.2975951904 1242% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1420.0 106.682146367 1331% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 252.0 20.7667163134 1213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 78.0 7.06120827912 1105% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141655238799 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141655238799 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763007501085 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282803496815 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 131.1 13.0946893788 1001% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -201.22 50.2224549098 -401% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 103.9 11.3001002004 919% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.85 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.59 8.58950901804 263% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.8 10.1190380762 1016% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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