Public places such as parks and squares are quite essential for all towns and cities because they have a variety benefits for the community. I agree with this premise as I do not see any demerit of this statement.
Park and big squares become a kind of hub for people to gather and socialise as so many people can be seen becoming introverts because of technology and their hectic schedules. Squares like the one in new york which is named as Times square, which has a bundle of different shops and also has the largest billboards which are similar to the size of a baseball field. Things like that become a source of attraction which is benefitcial for the businesses there as they pull crowds towards them, which eventually leads to the betterment of the small cities which are still growing.
Gardens have their own particular merits that should not be ignored by the societies. Parks should be present in every block of the city as it is not only used by old people but the young people and middle aged individuals as well. Parks motivate the people to get out of their caves to get rid of their laziness by having a morning walk and getting some physical exercise in the morning time. Having parks nearby our home would also indirectly decrease the risk of cardiac arrests because going for a walk for just 20 minutes a day has been proved to keep the heart healthy.
Conclusion, I agree with this thought of having public places near us as it is useful for every age group.
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
- The chart below shows the number of students from four different countries applying to a European university Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people 56
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors Do you agree or disagree 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57677902622 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35157083586 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0273778461 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273523822777 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112323616798 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999267863624 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205318793748 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141628587846 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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