It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Children are usually not aware of the mistakes they make, such as talking loudly when having meals, taking other's belongings without asking for permission. Thus, it is crucial for teachers and parents to tell them what is right and what is wrong. In my opinion, punishment is needed, but it must be in a reasonable way in which kids can realize their mistakes.
To begin with, children can quickly foster good habits for fear of being punished. If they keep being naughty, talking with partners in class, teachers need to punish those students in hope of warning other students of the same behavior. After punishment like standing in the front of the classroom, they can behave well in class in the future. What's more, some mistakes are extremely dangerous and once they make those mistakes, severe punishments must be taken by parents. For instance, if a child takes candy from a stranger, we have no idea whether the candy contains medicine and there is a possibility that the child will be kidnapped. Hence, if parents find that their children cannot refuse things from strangers, they must punish them in case they will be in danger.
In terms of what kind of punishment should be made, parents and teachers should utilize the right way. For parents, they cannot teach their kids a lesson by not giving them food to eat. After all, no matter what mistake children make, they need nutritious food to grow up. For teachers, the best punishment is to assign more homework to those who are naughty. Teachers should bear in mind that young as students are, they must be respected by others.
All in all, punishment can enable children to quickly correct their wrong behavior. However, the correct way to punish them is of great importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, after all, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85284280936 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39896100969 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0353957856 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209222570323 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836593930104 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601837430989 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151412614684 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292078153811 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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