It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Taking risks has become an integral part of many people lives. It would be necessary to take risks either in professional or individual life. There are many downsides to taking risks, but I believe that overall, there are lots of beneficial aspects in it.
One of the main reasons why people would be taking risks is that gain an opportunity to promote themselves. It is very important that use this chance excellently. For example, in individual side a person takes risks when getting married. It is a big risk because you share your private life with another and this makes your partner knows most of your secret and help you to solve them. not only would you help in any personal aspects but also, she would promote you in higher level of personal life that you don’t know any thing about them before.
Another point is it would be necessary many times to do risks in your professional life. Somebody who want to benefit more should taking risks. But this is like a twin blade if the person successes can progress and develop his/her job and career if not makes him/her become bankrupt and loss everything. Taking risks give a special brave to persons to do works that normal people cannot. Such as invest on pretty rubbish or recycle materials that less people think about them. not only can get a special information and knowledge about them but also it would change your life extremely toward happiness.
Finally, even though risks have negative sides but there are lots of positive side that people can change their lives with them. In my view, every risk which would be help you in your personal or professional life you should do.
In conclusion, it is true if people fail in risk have negative effect on their lives but by taking risks, they can develop and change their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Not
...your secret and help you to solve them. not only would you help in any personal asp...
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Suggestion: anything
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Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70158730159 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30228560835 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520634920635 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7993755661 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1176470588 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388586479478 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132297690345 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861676852943 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244553159328 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476528853256 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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