It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
History of any countries has vital for their dwellers. A recent decade are witness of development in education sector. Amid this development, there is one phenomenon that has associated with it according to this phenomenon, history of the native country should be taught in the school not other countries history. While it has more benefits connected this belief, it also has some negative aspect. I will try to throw light upon learned both in as it has their own moral value. I will also try to perspective.
To embark on, there are multifarious reason to shore that people who are in favor of education department should teach their nation history. First and foremost if school cater the lesson of past of their country than student can be learnt moral value of history as well as how our ancestors defence the typical situation rather opt any crime way. In addition people get aware about history they how people line their life with sacrifice some needy things. Furthermore, students have been learnt the value of time and make renewable person as a role model. They motivate from their life and follow theirs rules for instance in India many students are motivated by story of swami Vivekananda and pursue their livelihood with simplicity. Secondly, students feel proud about their nation after learning of that incidents. So, it is more likely to students also influenced to do something unique for their nation developments
On the downside of spectrum, there are several reason which connected to world history or local history. Firstly there are lot incident that has adverse impact which are taken by students. If students follow that person than they also continue on that way without thinking about its consequences. Such, as many people who are joint to harsh business of smuggling or drugs. This may lead to get bad impression on child's development.
In term of world history, people are more influenced from that place which has been preserved with good sigh scenery. So, people would like to travel in near future at that place which help to boost economy if both nation. So, both has great value of their history.
Aggelomerating, all the point I elaborated that it can be concluded that indeed, local history has more pros on their native dwellers as well as they are more feasible to pursue the development and preserve their nation from misery. As well as, world history is also much crucial to offer the knowledge about some disaster that happened in other country's past. That is why I support with this declaration. Hence, it is more fruitful in my opinion
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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...or local history. Firstly there are lot incident that has adverse impact which are taken...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9495412844 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52616140754 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516055045872 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5158794498 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9166666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179533030278 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495159783579 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508842763768 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106316531485 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022581069947 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.