It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures. We can learn from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that movies , books and the World Wide Web can teach us about foreign cultures as much as travelling does, and thus international travel is no longer needed if we wish to broaden our minds. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this opinion.
First, travelling is the only way to learn about a culture. Only by travelling could one be able to have the most realistic experience of the local people’s live. A culture revolves about how people of a certain country think, behave and believe. Many expatriates in Vietnam confess that before they came here, they never expected the country to be so dynamic and fast-growing, with millions of cars traversing on a daily basis. Books and movies about Vietnam, which mostly talk about the Vietnam War, portrait and imprint on their minds a much less exciting picture.
Second, passive sources of learning like the Internet could only provide knowledge about a culture, not the experience. Many people have learnt about the ancient Egyptian culture and their accomplishments like the pyramid through online articles or children books. However, such learning experience could never compare to a chance to stand in front of the 20-feet tall pyramid and marvel at its existence. Furthermore, one could learn many secret anectdotes about Pharaoahs and the pyramids from locals, many of which are unavailable online or never appear in any book or movie.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that books, films and the Internet could only introduce us to alien culture. If we desire to learn about them, travelling to the place and experience it ourselves is the only way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08888888889 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65820997194 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4097036026 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249126138611 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935278154008 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617917632253 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158420699105 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296109227029 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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