Nowadays, as women and men have to work full time, household duties should be equally divided.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that men and women should take equal responsibility when it comes to household duties, since either of them could be in full-time employment these days. While I support this statement, I also believe there are better ways to deal with housework rather than dividing tasks equally among couples.
To begin with, there are two reasons why men and women should spend an equal amount of time on domestic work. First, there has been major changes in the structure of modern families over the last decades. Woman’s role is no longer associated with solely house chores, and many of them are now working as many hours as their male partners. A lot of men are becoming aware of the gender inequality in the division of housework, and therefore are more willing to share responsibility with their partners. Second, since women can now easily voice their opinions, conflicts might easily occur when household duties are unevenly divided. Many couples often argue over the dishes or laundry, which is one of the main contributors to a high rate of divorce in countries like the U.S.
However, I also believe there are other ways to handle household duties instead of trying to divide tasks evenly among men and women. Firstly, because it is difficult to equally divide household chores, many families decide to hire housemaids. This will not only help couples to avoid arguments but also focus better on their work, and therefore enhance work efficiency. In addition, parents can ask their children to be responsible for household duties. For example, many Vietnamese children are taught to clean the house or cook meals at an early age, which helps to ease the burden on parents and prepare important soft skills for them in the future.
In conclusion, although I agree that household tasks should be shared evenly between men and women, they could seek help from other people, be it a housemaid or their own children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99692307692 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49176442322 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587692307692 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3039283466 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273119451462 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093849061969 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834536278351 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17503083476 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280960805704 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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