It is not up to our doctors to keep us healthy we should do it ourselves. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is appreciated that we are in charge of our well-being, not the doctors. From my perspective, I genuinely disagree with this statement.
Initially, relying on medical practitioners is the top choice when people have health problems on account of doctors’ specialization and cutting-edge medical equipment. This is derived from the fact that in order to get a medical qualification, students must channel their efforts into acquiring knowledge and long time practice; therefore, they will attain well-trained skills to take care of patients’ health. Moreover, the workplaces of doctors are often hospitals or clinics, where there is necessary equipment and medications for treating illnesses. By following the medical practitioners’ instructions, our well-being would be protected.
By contrast, hazardous consequences can happen to people who take their well-being in their own hands without any heath knowledge. For example, in some rural areas, especially in underdeveloped nations, there are adversely popular misconceptions about health, such as eating insects can cure flu. These superstitious beliefs, sadly, are followed by lots of people, leading to adverse effects on their physical state, even deaths. Additionally, some remote corners of the world do not have any doctors so the patients often miss symptoms of severe disease, and get late diagnosis, which may make their health go downhill.
In conclusion, as medical practitioners are professionally trained and aided with equipment to take care of people's health and individuals with no health knowledge are not capable of caring for their well-being, my verdict is that it is up to our doctors to keep us healthy, not us
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 622, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich may make their health go downhill. In conclusion, as medical practitioners ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: NOT_US1[1]
Message: Did you mean 'use'?
Suggestion: use
... to our doctors to keep us healthy, not us
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58687258687 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2433305743 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.590765146 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.545454545 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146014690637 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568913684668 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628870352304 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112810814096 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736098716459 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 622, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich may make their health go downhill. In conclusion, as medical practitioners ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: NOT_US1[1]
Message: Did you mean 'use'?
Suggestion: use
... to our doctors to keep us healthy, not us
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58687258687 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2433305743 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.590765146 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.545454545 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146014690637 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568913684668 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628870352304 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112810814096 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736098716459 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.