It is not uncommon that children are required to obey the rule of their parents and teachers. Some people are worried that too much control over children will not prepare them well for their adult life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, parental and teacher control over the lives of children has been a growing concern. Commonly, children are expected to follow the rules of their parents and teachers. However, some people think that with excessive control in young individuals, they will not be prepared for the many rigors of adult life. In my opinion, guidance is necessary for young people but parents and teachers should not be too hard on them because it may lead to negative consequences.
Undoubtedly, obedience to authorities, especially to parents and teachers has positive effects on the overall well-being of a child. It is in the right intention of parents to raise their children in order for them to be better individuals. For example, honesty as a rule in the home should be implemented by parents through emphasizing that lying is a wrong habit while giving positive reinforcement if children said the truth. Thus, imposing disciplinary guidelines early on a child’s life could help them become morally upright individuals in society.
However, there are cases when excessive disciplinary measures are being imposed by parents and teachers, which have a negative impact on a child’s life. With too much authority imposed on young people, they tend to rebel against the rules. According to psychologists, the increased feeling of a child being trapped and having no control in his/her life makes him/her resort to negative behavior. Another point is that some children who are submissive tend to depend on their entire lives on their parents. They become passive in making a decision for their own lives while others even become financially dependent on their parents. Therefore, there should be moderation on imposing authority over the lives of young people in order for them not to suffer any potential ill effects.
Considering the two sides of the discussion, it could be inferred that in preparing children to live an adult life, there should be proper guidance with the moderation on regulations imposed. Children also need to make independent decisions in their lives in order for them to develop holistically. They need to be reprimanded if they go beyond the rules but they should also be allowed to exercise their freedom and rights.
To conclude, requiring children to obey rules makes them prepared for the basic principles in life but it could lead to too much dependence if parents and teachers are excessively controlling. Thus, a balance between control and freedom should be given to them.
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Suggestion:
...reparing children to live an adult life, there should be proper guidance with the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17936117936 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80444417361 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488943488943 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.709818478 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.947368421 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4210526316 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389829517543 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132732637712 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077819952266 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253239828474 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803572535238 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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