It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as South Pole.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, there are a number of scholars and travellers can visit the south pole which is the natural and preserved environment. it is put forward by some people that it is advantageous. The opponents, on the other hand, argue that there are several drawbacks as well. this essay will identify both the benefits and drawbacks before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with the points in favour of tourism in the south pole, the most persuasive one is perhaps that scientists can research the reasons for global warming to arrange alternatives. it will be contributed to future generations. Another point often made by the proponents of this position is that there are tremendous sources of energy, including natural gas, and scholars will be able to bring it in to replace with other resources.
Despite the advantages, there are a number of negatives arising out of this issue as well. one of the most conspicuous disadvantages is maybe that global warming will be more serious due to the acquisitiveness of human. this is evidenced by the fact that now global warming is a big issue in our society and it is occurred by the development of human society. As well as this, the natural resources and echo-system in the south pole can be destroyed as it could be a last resort.
To sum, it can be observed that there are both benefits and ill effects in relation to whether travel to remote natural area is beneficial or harmful. To choose, which side I am on, I believe that positives far surpass disadvantages, owing to the reasons discussed above. However, the important thing is that our society should have a responsibility to address the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9020979021 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87291758244 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527972027972 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.723123787 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20307785838 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583239264762 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601262637049 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111881135057 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327521548622 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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