Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Boxing matches boast the best popularity and infrastructure among martial arts. However, it is concern that this sport includes many dangerous consequences such as physical disorders, so there are many opponents of this game. Some people, on the other hand, argue that there are a number of benefits on learning boxing. This essay will identify both viewpoints surrounding this issue before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, some people believe that there are several issues on boxing matches but the most conspicuous one is perhaps that it occurs great risks such as a fracture, haemorrhage and even death. In other words, no one can ensure the player’s safety since there are vague rules which allow physical violence. A number of heroes passed away during a game and families are still suffering from the death of their loved one. Another point often made by proponents of this view is that this can cause some ill-effects on adolescent teenagers. This is evidenced by the fact that some popular boxers who used to win many matches can be praised as a hero and youngsters with curiosity may imitate their fighting skills which can occur school violence. Thus, these people believe that boxing game should be banned.
Despite the aforementioned viewpoint, there are proponents of boxing matches as well. These people present several arguments but the most convincing argument is perhaps that learning a self-defence martial art allows people to protect themselves from dangerous situations such as physical assault. People are able to learn how they react quickly to offence. As well as this, it is a popular exercise for those who are obese as it is an active sport. It helps them to burn fat quickly so that they can keep fit and maintain their health.
To some up, it can be observed that there are both viewpoints in relation to whether boxing game is appropriate or not. To choose which side I am on, I believe that there are several risks on this sport to some extent, but with understanding the regulations and right purpose, this can be an effective sport for young and old population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to box'.
Suggestion: to box
...re are a number of benefits on learning boxing. This essay will identify both viewpoin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94957983193 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61190926421 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535014005602 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3597798829 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.941176471 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140976302545 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456956429565 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446817719973 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961281010071 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251750276643 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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