It’s better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world?
Nowadays, many people tend to spend money on whatever they like, while others think that money should be spent more wisely. Personally, I think saving money is a priority action which need taking immediately during these economic recession days due to covid 19.
To begin, the person who saves money knows how to manage money on those rainy day, which is so really smart of them. Additionally, spending less money on unnecessary things can decreases the expenditure which we can allocate for many needed stuff instead of buying some waste home taking up some room in our house. In this uncertain world, saving money can help you more than you ever needed. Your children’s tuition fee, for instance, is really high, so parents always save money since they were so little. Doing that continuously for 16 years, they finally could afford the fee. Or when you are sick or have an operation, besides insurance, you also need more money to cover the medicine money. Furthermore, saving also means that you will have some interests from the bank you store your money. And you will not bother about the thieve breaking into your house steal your money. It’s a win-win for you. Moreover, you will gain a large sums through monthly contributing to the saving, so you can also afford a car or a property.
On the other hand, those peers who prefer spending money carelessly have their own excuses. Thinking that life is short, they want to live their best life, consequently, they have nothing left. Living for the present, they forget to live for the future. That way of thinking is quite wrong, and I don’t agree with that at all.
To conclude, saving money should be everyone’s first choice before thinking about spending it on unnecessary stuffs. People should practice the money management skills in order to prepare themselves for the uncertain future.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stuff seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much needed stuff', 'a good deal of needed stuff'.
Suggestion: much needed stuff; a good deal of needed stuff
...e expenditure which we can allocate for many needed stuff instead of buying some waste home takin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 828, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ur money. And you will not bother about the thieve breaking into your house steal your mon...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 938, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sum'?
Suggestion: sum
...or you. Moreover, you will gain a large sums through monthly contributing to the sav...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, while, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90158730159 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39619670089 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606349206349 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4267197061 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285692222265 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899901989182 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799092041759 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1495528631 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712349517498 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stuff seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much needed stuff', 'a good deal of needed stuff'.
Suggestion: much needed stuff; a good deal of needed stuff
...e expenditure which we can allocate for many needed stuff instead of buying some waste home takin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 828, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ur money. And you will not bother about the thieve breaking into your house steal your mon...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 938, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sum'?
Suggestion: sum
...or you. Moreover, you will gain a large sums through monthly contributing to the sav...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, while, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90158730159 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39619670089 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606349206349 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4267197061 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285692222265 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899901989182 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799092041759 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1495528631 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712349517498 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.