Nowadays it is a concern of few people that brutality of Tv programs having a very bad effective on our social life, its should be reduced. This essay delves into agreement of this statement.
First and foremost, these days tv channel showing many unethical things in all day. Some people taking its seriously and choosing wrong path therefore it should be minimise for our social life. For instance some tv channel showing about murder cases in tv program, its showing murder planning and process of removing evidence, because of this some criminal follow the idea and doing violence without leaving any evidence. therefore we should be aware from these program but some people choose it for criminal activity.
To begin with, there also some tv program showing about unethical relationship like cheating with husband, for example these days some people cheating their relatives and making relationship with other person, it is very dangerous for family and their own future its also break our social life, it goes without saying that we should neglect negative things and keep children for away from these programs.
To recapitulate, now in our modern society tv program playing an important role for good way as well as bad way. We should avoid all bad things and always take good message from program.some program not good for kids so we should keep them away . In my opinion I believe that some tv program should be reduced because its harmful for our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...l things in all day. Some people taking its seriously and choosing wrong path there...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to wrong'
Suggestion: to wrong
...eople taking its seriously and choosing wrong path therefore it should be minimise fo...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'minimised'?
Suggestion: minimised
...osing wrong path therefore it should be minimise for our social life. For instance some ...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... violence without leaving any evidence. therefore we should be aware from these program b...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
... violence without leaving any evidence. therefore we should be aware from these program b...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ngerous for family and their own future its also break our social life, it goes wit...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ood for kids so we should keep them away . In my opinion I believe that some tv pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9918699187 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39224325258 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.7295714867 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265422922606 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122572236269 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060003269016 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180717090334 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485656324027 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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