It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion.
It is true that many of us often want to hold some sort of talents. Some people believe that talent is a natural gift that cannot be created by ourselves. Whereas others argue that it is possible to develop talents such as professional sportsmen and musicians among young people. In my opinion, I believe that a child an be taught talents such as sportsmen or musicians through guidance and hardwork.
On the one hand, many people claim that people are born with talents as a form of gift by god. One reason why this view is held is because of some sections of people who masters the skills without any effort or education. These people outperform their competitors without the requirement of training or education. For example, my own bother sings really well and has won trophies in his school days but the fact is that neither we provided him coaching classes nor he practiced singing songs in his earlier life.
On the one hand, others argue that children can be taught talents by specializing in continuous guidance and training. It is true that a person can be influenced with education and supervision. A person can learn the necessary skills and gain perfection in it. To illustrate this, one of the most famous footballer, Lionel Messi sated in an interview that the support he received from his grandmother and daily training offered by his coach was the most contributing factor behind his successful career in football. Hence, a child can develop talents even if are born without it.
In conclusion, it is from all discussions that both arguments carry equal strength and significance. However, I personally subscribe to the propositive that everyone has the potential to become talented as others if they receive proper guidance and training.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, sort of, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94949494949 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72670318699 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2326284922 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21687687443 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745913517213 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391436672162 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121428713039 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175191528642 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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