As the world becomes technologically advanced, computer are replacing more and more job. What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers What are some problems that may result from this situation.
Nowadays, computer systems have been grown very quickly so a lot of things in a short time could be done his essay will discuss how computers could replace citizens’ work and will describe its consequence.
Nobody before did not know that in the future computer would eliminate jobs of people.
A number of jobs have been lost as a direct result of new computer technology because of what year after year people get unemployed.
Due to the fact that the internet is developing rapidly, online-shopping replaces a lot of work in different spheres. Therefore, more than half of the shop-assistants begin to lose their job position. For example, in USA there is a big shopping store named Amazon. Instead of workers, store uses only online-payment and sensory protection against theft work. As a result, the number of positions lost to computers grows exponentially, and unemployment continues to get worse.
By reason of employees starting to lose their work positions, there are a lot of bad results from this illustrated situation. For instance, community becoming more and more lazier, also becoming to be dependent on technology. In addiction, there could be lead declining of education’s level, after, citizens will lose their experience in different areas, which is the biggest problem of the humanity.
In my opinion, in next the years there would be developing of new work trends.
As computers replace jobs, new positions will have to be invented. More and more people will go into new business for themselves, and hopefully put the personal touch back into their work. In my opinion, the human workforce will demonstrate that it is more valuable than computer techniques.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'lazier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lazier
...r instance, community becoming more and more lazier, also becoming to be dependent on techn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19636363636 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9980577735 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8629500796 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29199556488 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929162127005 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648108767531 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129616199108 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596142629614 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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