Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Major international conglomerates have been increasing their market share by spending gigantic funds on advertisements. This has threatened numerous local businesses and impacted detrimentally on buyers due to more expensive cost or Illusory advertising. The government alongside individuals need to come together to support the small-scale businesses.
One of the paramount problems caused by attractive campaigns on television and social media of big companies can threat to local traders which have a tight budget to spend on appealing marketing and promotion. When big businesses carry out a promotional campaign, the customers only pay attention and buy their products, ignoring products of small traders. For example, well-known brands in manufacturing soft drink such as Coca-Cola or Pepsi spend a huge amount of money on advertising in over the world, as a result, everyone buys their products and skips other small brands. This problem leads to the closure of small businesses and the jobless of thousands of people.
There are two effective ways for local businesses to compete with international giants are to provide personal services and financially support by the government. First of all, the government had better allocate sufficient funds to encourage local brands. This solution can help small companies have abilities to pay expenses such as locations or loans. Furthermore, individuals play major part in encouraging local brands. For instance, rather than buying a big company’s products, they should try local products and review them on social media in order to help local companies in sales of product.
In conclusion, big companies are always a huge competition for local businesses and can threat to their survival. However, these problems can be handled with the appropriate actions from authorities and people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88104089219 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14270440566 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635687732342 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2232284461 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0536378359514 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0184136807485 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213493763329 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0354919537423 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148881100773 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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