Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is often debate about whether advertising products in occasional sports event have disadvantaged effects on sports. In my opinion, i disagree with this statement that big companies will bring a negative impact on sports.
On the one hand, it is true that commercials in sport events will bring some disadvantages between sports and the products. In other word, advertising in sports event may sometimes affect athletes 's performance. To be more specific, professional players have to spend a certain amount of time of the commercial at the studio meaning that they could have limited spare time to practice. As a result, athletes may lose focus on regular training. Also, products are not as good as advertised such as coca contains a great percentage of sugar which is not a good option. This can lead to unpredictable consequences which easily attracted youngsters to form an unhealthy lifestyle.
On the other hand, the advantages of advertising products through sport events are overwhelming. The most important reason is that this trend can split the cost of organizations or transmit motivations to players. When professional players win the championship, large companies will express supports through several gifts or money to pay for preparations of the next tournaments or practice and equipment cost. Futhermore, footballers could become more closer with the public through means of transport. They can play a role model in the young generation especially fashion, lifestyle and some positive messages. This will polist athletes' image and inspire many enthusiasts.
In conclusion, although this trend could affect players' quality and create several health problems for customers, i still infavor of the opinion that advertising can play a critical sifnificiance in sports like the reduction cost of sports organizaions and polist players's image.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45862068966 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03438283535 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.337218675 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.533333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22210641314 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723058688739 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655544601355 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142977683099 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467383449487 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.