Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that corporations these days sponsor sporting events so as to advertise their products. While some argue that this would negatively influence sports, I believe its benefits are more significant than any perceived downsides.
Detractors of corporate sponsorships point out the potential disturbance of such sponsors. Specifically, the sponsorship of sporting competitions could lead to the annoyance of certain products on particular athletes as corporations tend to display their logos and products during sports games as well as interviews. For example, Pogba, a famous soccer player, took the bottle of Heineken out of his sight during an interview because his religion did not allow him to drink alcoholic beverages, and thus the appearance of such products was an insult to him. Additionally, a reduction in focus on the actual sport could somehow be attributed to sports sponsors. Since many advertisements related to companies' products would bombard commercial breaks, billboards around the arenas, affecting the flow and performance during the match] some sports fans would feel annoyed and consider such events are nothing but a marketing tool for these products.
However, I believe the benefits related to adequate funds for sports events and athletes' incomes outweigh the aforementioned disadvantages. Having generous sponsors would obviously allow organizers to invest more money in upgrading stadiums or installing many modern facilities. As a result, such events could be organized more professionally so audiences can have a better overall experience. Besides, if there are many large firms sponsoring sport competitions, the prize money for a winner could be higher. This can act as a huge incentive for athletes to devote a great deal of time and effort to practice more diligently, which could lead to a more intensely competitive match for sports fans to enjoy.
In conclusion, though some claim that corporate sponsorship could negatively affect sports, I believe its advantages are more significant since such sponsors could help maintain professional facilities and pay athletes' incomes. Many large companies should therefore continue sponsoring sporting events, contributing to the growth of sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to
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Suggestion: sport
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63313609467 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07307451622 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58875739645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7962418777 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208299128623 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805667952803 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548675368713 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135980747894 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323069088176 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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