In the modern era, the mode of transport also rose dramatically in roadways, railways, waterways and even airways. Compared to other ways the aviation has rose rapidly. There are many reasons for the increase and also contains some negative effects. This essay delves the reasons and also gives my opinion whether it is good or bad thing.
On one hand, people are travelling to various nations for there work or even for tourism. In olden days this is very hard as we need to change many buses and trains sometimes even we need to cross oceans through ships. This generally takes more time and costs huge. The modern age came with the solution of air ways. With this, people can go to far nations by using booking flight tickets and this usually takes less time compared to others. For instance, if a person from India wants to study in Canada he needs to go to that country. With the use of aeroplains he can just sit in plain and reach the required destination without wasting time and facing risk of changing modes of transport.\
On the other hand, there are some consequences by this increase. The main are noise pollution and air pollution. With increase in vehicles the gases released also grows. Due to this the air we intake gets harmful and intern effects lungs. Moreover, it even causes global warming as the gases can damage ozone layer. The sound produced from engines is also loud compared to others. Thus, causes damage to ears of the people living near by. For example, in the Tokyo the airport lies in the middle of city. Therefore, many flights come and leave, thus have making the people near to it uncomfortable by disturbing them through sound.
To conclude, the rise in airways is due to the demand of people to travel for different reasons which is a good thing. There are some negative sides like increase in pollution. But, by considering all factors it is a better thing to happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ses damage to ears of the people living near by. For example, in the Tokyo the airport ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6706231454 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33689274913 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557863501484 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9847078207 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5454545455 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3181818182 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168513062938 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485056590902 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499356173404 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110849124198 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307663257935 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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