These days due to the increase in technology and other factors each individual can know about other nations easily. It is often though that rise in the economic and traditional engagement between countries gives pleasant impact, while others think it does not. This essay will discuss both views and gives my point of view. However, I stand with the former view.
Firstly, each and every government needs help from others to run a city or country. Although, some are well developed like united states of America, some are still under development like Africa. To become economically strong and well secure these need help from those who are already good. For instance, as there is not proper education in some parts of Africa it becomes difficult for them to have high literacy rate. Thus, the development will not rise. To overcome this the USA and other nations started NGO's to build schools and colleges. With this the people gets proper schooling and can find jobs. Moreover, they will help in building the GDP.
Secondly, if a nation gets there cultural impact it intern brings new tradition values. This not only helps in knowing new things but also we can learn about other persons and there way of living. The world is vast and there are new things in every part. In our life we need to know everything as we are part of earth. This process of interacting with others can help in a drastic way. I would like to give my experience, as I causally spending time online I came across a video in which Russian vlogs video came. By watching this video I came to know about there way of living, food they eat and there festivals. Until then I thought entire world will be like my hometown but I was wrong.
To sum up, having relationship between other nations gives some drawbacks like losing nations identity but the preceding over weigh these in many other ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69512195122 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3030625835 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4611833869 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202806762026 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537113090902 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629258688035 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152839907651 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880259155368 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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