Leaders and directors in organizations are often older people. Some people say that younger people could be leaders. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that high positions in a company are usually taken by elderly people. Some people argue that younger individuals are more suitable to in charge of the firms. Although old people have significantly important qualities, I believe younger ones are more likely to become a good leader.
On the one hand, elderly people can be a good leader for some reasons. Firstly, because of working hard for many years, old people have accumulated much more work experience compared to younger workers. This might allow them to make wise decisions that can bring an enormously successful for their organizations. Secondly, The Aged person is often more respected by others. Therefore, they can have a more powerful voice within their companies, and this may be a great tool for them to operate the firm.
On the other hand, I think it will be better if leadership is a young person. First of all, with their enthusiasm for the jobs, a young manager can handle bigger responsibilities and much work. Being a leader requires people to work with many pressures in a long time and devote themselves entirely, which is difficult for older people to do that. As a result, more and more young people become the leader of one country in recent times, such as in France or Ukraine. Moreover, younger people are extremely creative and industrious. They always try to work hard in order to find newer and efficient measures for the improvement of their companies. For example, a young manager will be able to operate modern technologies far better than older people because they are born in the modern life and they have an ability to learn and use it faster. If leaders are older, they might, it hard to develop their corporations become bigger.
In conclusion, while elder people can be a good director, I believe that this position is much more suitable with young managers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86833855799 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63576158237 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526645768025 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1187626592 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7647058824 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245488920835 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906560936683 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716319497558 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161303148188 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355684944954 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.